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IELTS Essay - Using Local Resources

This IELTS essay discusses whether local resources should be used over resources from other countries. The issue is that some people think this is better for the environment. 

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IELTS Essay Using Local ResourcesShould local resources be used rather than importing?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The best way to protect the environment is to use local resources, such as food or building materials, rather than transporting resources from other countries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer

Using local resources instead of importing goods from other countries is often seen as a key way to protect the environment. While there are clear environmental benefits to this approach, there are also drawbacks to consider.

On the one hand, utilising local resources has several environmental advantages. Firstly, it mitigates the need to transport goods or food over long distances, especially by plane, ship or truck, all of which are major sources of greenhouse gas emissions and thus contributing to pollution and global warming. In addition to this, local sourcing often supports sustainable practices as local farmers and producers are more likely to use environmentally friendly methods suited to their region, and short supply chains can mean less packaging and waste. Additionally, supporting local industries can strengthen the economy and encourage communities to protect their natural resources.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to relying only on resources local areas. In some regions, the climate or geography may not support the production of certain goods and so trying to grow or manufacture these items locally could result in using more energy and water than importing them. A case in point is the growing  of tropical fruits in colder countries, often requiring heated greenhouses, which can increase carbon emissions. Moreover, international trade can sometimes be more efficient and cost-effective, both economically and environmentally, depending on how goods are produced and transported.

In conclusion, it is my view that local resources should be used where possible as this can greatly benefit the environment by reducing emissions and promoting sustainability, but it is not always the best or most efficient solution. A balanced approach that considers both local and global options is likely to be the most effective way to protect the planet.

(288 Words)


Comments

This IELTS essay about using local resources would score highly as it meets the criteria in the band descriptor for the higher levels. 

In the introduction, the topic is introduced and there is then a thesis statement clearly setting out that the essay will look at both the pros and cons of using local resources. 

It's clearly organised as the body paragraphs are then divided up into advantages and disadvantages.

In agree/disagree essays you need a clear opinion but you don't have to say you 100% agree or disagree - you can have a more balanced opinion like in this essay and partly agree as you sympathise with both sides of the issue. 

There is good mix of topic-related vocabulary and a wide range of grammatical structures that are accurate.

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