Social Interaction Essays
by Simpi
(Gurgaon)
Soclal Interaction
Nowadays we communicate less with our family members.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that millennial generation is largely witnessing the shrinking communication among family members. This essay completely agrees with the statement and discusses how changing life style and enhancing indulgence into the virtual world are impacting the personal lives of young generation.
Firstly, the changing lifestyle owing to huge educational burden, intense competition, and 24/7 work commitments especially in developing countries has put a huge pressure on young generation leaving a little room for them to spend time with family members and enjoy on family occasions. One clear example is young generation specifically in developing countries majorly involve in projects at workplace that include co-ordination among people from different countries which often leads to largely working late nights owing to different time zones. The prevailing late night working culture creates a major time mismatch with other members in the family.
Secondly, the blurring line between real and virtual life such as easy access to social media, internet browsing, various applications and games on mobile itself engage youth and capture major chunk of the day. As per a survey conducted by American Youth Association, the millennial prefer to spend 80% of their idle time on internet and a meager 5% of their time with family.
To conclude, the changing life style and evolution of virtualization have completely disrupted the personal life of young generation. This has left little time for personal communication that nurture the relationships, hence witnessed the rising number of relationships going sour in modern society.
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Living Alone
by Hayder Ahmed
(Leeds, UK)
In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone.
What are the causes of this?
Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?
Recently, the number of people who live alone is increasing in the world. Many people want to live far away from their families. There are many reasons for this and it is agreed that this have a negative aspects on the society. Analysing both the reasons of living alone as well as drawbacks of this on the community will show this.
Firstly, there are many reasons of why people decide to be alone and leave their families. One of the reasons is lack of relationship among members of family leads to a person to live alone. For example, when a problem occurs between two persons, who have a weak relationship, in a family. Consequently, these persons leave their families and live far away. Another reason is that many people want to be independent. For instance, recently many youngers work and make many that help them to live independent and then get marriage. Thus this makes it clear why some people decide to live far away from their families.
Secondly, as a number of people who want to live alone increase, this have a negative effects on the society. One of the effects is the social activities in the community decrease and the cooperation becomes weak. For example, the old people do not obtain a help when the relationship among members of society is weak. Another effect is young people when be alone may be attractive by criminals and they do crimes in the society because they do not receive advices from their parents. From this it becomes quiet evident that living alone have many drawbacks on the society.
In summary, many reasons make people live alone and this has many negative aspects on the community. After analysing the reasons and negative effects of this, it is predicted that disadvantages of this subject much more than
advantages.
(300 words)
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Dependent or Independent Relationships
by Sameep David
(India)
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The modern world is integrated socially where technology plays a crucial role. While technology has given the people freedom to enjoy their life independently, they have also become dependent on each other’s support when things do not go well in this fast paced society. This essay will analyze both the views and will explain why people have become more independent nowadays.
In the modern world, it is fairly easy to share information with anyone. People are heavily involved on social networking sites where they get updates about the people they are connected to. The posts only shows the amazing things happening in someone’s life like travelling to a new country, getting a job in a top multinational company or buying a car which triggers disappointment and negativity to the reader. In order to overcome these thoughts, people need emotional and moral support of the family. A recent study conducted by the Cambridge University highlighted people who are regularly online on networking sites are less happier to those who uses them rarely.
Although, with help of modern devices people have become more independent than they were before. A youngster staying away from his/her family is more comfortable in managing life by cooking food through online videos or easily commuting from one city to another. The modern technology has also assisted the people to connect with their family and loved ones when they are in a different city to earn a livelihood. This has assisted the children to move away from parents to achieve their goals and aspirations.
In conclusion, the dependence on people will always be there one way or another but due to the modern way of life people have become more independent and will continue to do so.
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IELTS Essay: Socialising Online
by Mahfy
(Dhaka, Bangladesh)
Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is a fact that, numerous people are choosing to socialize virtually rather than face to face. Personally, I think this kind of development is negative and, in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
Firstly, an online person may possess threat as they cannot be trusted properly. They might carry a fake identity as it is easier to open a social account with fake details. Therefore, it is easier to get scammed or get played by trust from such online friends. Conversely, a real-life friend is more trusted as they have a real identity and can be seen more often. Thus, it is difficult to lie face to face, they carry less lies compared to virtual friends.
Secondly, many people are getting addictive to the online social network. As online platforms have large audience and have more activities to enjoy with friends. As a result, many health complications are seen such as eyesight difficulties, obesity, and bad postures. For instance, resent research showed that 60% of adults in Dhaka who use digital devices have eyesight problems and 40% of adults have bad body posture. However, compared to virtual friends, hanging out with real life friends is more beneficial as it reduces online addiction. This may lead to much healthier life and environment to live on.
In conclusion, socializing online is a negative development to me as they convey threats, lack of trusts, carry more lies. People should engage more with real life friends as it provides more trusted, healthier, and secured life.
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