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IELTS Line Graph - Tourists Visiting Caribbean Island

by Melih

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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The chart illustrates the amount of tourists visiting Carribean Island in time period of 2010-2017 while classifying tourists into three categories as total number of tourists visiting the island, as the ones who staying on cruise ships and other tourists who stay on island.

The graph depicts that there is an overall raise in tourist numbers especially a high rated raise between 2016-2017. It is seen that the amount of people travelled the island raised 350% through 7 years constantly.

Moving on with the tourists on cruise ships, it must be told that besides the fall between 2011-2012, there is a fixed positive slop for this category as it goes up from less than 0.5 million to 2 millions.

When we look at the tourists who choose to stay on island, there is neither no strict and permanent increase nor decrease. There is a growth reflected until 2013 although as it stayed almost same for 2 years, it decreased and raised back between 2015-2017.

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